Pretty good start to everything. See some interesting possibilities. A lot of typos but you are just one person and I assume this demo version was put together rather quickly. If you'd like any help with the story, characters and/or editorial stuff such as fixing typos and improving the existing dialogue, I'd be happy to help.
Yep, just me developing the game for now and I'm already working on fixing the dialogues. The help it's really appreciated, but I really don't want to have people working on this for free (I can't afford hiring people this early). Still, if you have any feedback or suggestions feel free to send them to me and I'll take them on count.
I get that man and no worries. I plan on making some games like this myself, but currently doing work on a sfw noire romance visual novel for a friend. I handle all the writing and some of the management stuff. I'd like to set up my own team eventually and create a variety of games.
Nice game. You wrote good sentences in hypnosis theme that felt natural. The game has great potential and many sandbox actions with that girl. It took around 25 mins for me to see all the plot. For next updates, there may be more actions, new characters, and options to replay some scenes. I can’t call it bad, but the beginning felt too quick. I mean the mc acted so experienced in mind control like he did it many times before. And his behavior also felt like this. Too rapid transition from ordinary human to magic user. So good luck in creating the game!
Thanks! I didn't want it to be slow but maybe I overdid it, anyways the scene replay is something that I'm working on but will still have to wait for the game to have a little bit more of content.
New user, only 1 game, 1 screenshot that's the same as the banner, and a description that doesn't say much or what's even currently available in the game.
Please update this page with more screenshots, and what this game contains right now at this stage in development! As it is, it's very suspicious.
Also I noticed you're using Patreon - I suggest against it. This can be considered dubious consent, and Patreon is mercilessly terminating pages with any implication of such content. Have you thought about SubscribeStar as a backup?
Just trying to prevent a tragedy before it strikes in the event this takes off!
As far as I know it should be alright, since there are some other projects like this out there and there is no problem with them. Still, creating a SubscribeStar is a good idea! But I'm already struggling with posting the game in other pages as well and managing the current ones (notice that I forgot to put the link to Patreon here until a few hours ago ;-;). For now I'll just keep working on the next update while fixing some stuff from this one. Anyways, thanks for the concern, I'll keep it on mind.
That may be true, but usually they last a bit before being taken down. It's not always immediate and it can garner a huge following before that even happens. A good example is Two Horns. It was up for around a year and the poor creator amassed a large following only for it to be shut down out of nowhere. Just a word of caution, simply because all it takes is one report or employee to look at it and everything you've worked for is gone, especially with content that contains dubious consent.
Good luck with the game! Just keep the warnings in mind, and maybe do some research on the topic. I could very well be wrong, but Patreon's ToS doesn't define a lot of things, it uses broad terms.
I can confirm this. Not a developer myself but this is a "kink" I have and ya pretty much any and every hynosis related game whether it is lewd or not gets removed. There were a ton of articles about it a few years ago. A law for animation changed and any user created content got destroyed. Patreon and many many many other sites started removing anything that might imply nonconsensual. We aren't just talking about rape here I mean anything that "suggests it. A good example is hypnosis clicker. it is a comedy and the hypnosis often blows up in your own face. There is nudity yes but you have to really really really work for it. Subscribe Star which admittedly has very hit or miss success rates for financing and worse often runs slow and or has downtime seems to be the "mecca" of any a crowdfunding platform doesn't support something or removes it we will.
I understand SOME of the games they remove but ya I have yet to see anyone whose game got removed from patreon get it back. Hypnosis in particular for whatever reason is a serious target of theirs.
But the weird thing is there are a ton of very graphic leaving nothing to the imagination straight up rape simulators that don't get removed. Anything with hypnosis gets removed. Sometimes its a day later sometimes its 3 hours later or a year later but if you search "my game was removed from patreon for hy" you don't even have to type hypnosis out fully you will find a good hundred posts of people saying their content game/artwork/story/song was removed for hypnosis.
It is at the point where it makes me think the founder of Patreon's father or mother left them as a child because someone hypnotized them into doing so.
Unfortunate the kink is particularly bad for being removed. I really hope this game becomes a bit like nano-control (the whole reason I now browse itch for games like this.) since that game really set the baseline for me for stuff like this.
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good job so far
Pretty good start to everything. See some interesting possibilities. A lot of typos but you are just one person and I assume this demo version was put together rather quickly. If you'd like any help with the story, characters and/or editorial stuff such as fixing typos and improving the existing dialogue, I'd be happy to help.
Yep, just me developing the game for now and I'm already working on fixing the dialogues. The help it's really appreciated, but I really don't want to have people working on this for free (I can't afford hiring people this early). Still, if you have any feedback or suggestions feel free to send them to me and I'll take them on count.
I get that man and no worries. I plan on making some games like this myself, but currently doing work on a sfw noire romance visual novel for a friend. I handle all the writing and some of the management stuff. I'd like to set up my own team eventually and create a variety of games.
Nice game. You wrote good sentences in hypnosis theme that felt natural. The game has great potential and many sandbox actions with that girl. It took around 25 mins for me to see all the plot. For next updates, there may be more actions, new characters, and options to replay some scenes. I can’t call it bad, but the beginning felt too quick. I mean the mc acted so experienced in mind control like he did it many times before. And his behavior also felt like this. Too rapid transition from ordinary human to magic user. So good luck in creating the game!
Thanks! I didn't want it to be slow but maybe I overdid it, anyways the scene replay is something that I'm working on but will still have to wait for the game to have a little bit more of content.
New user, only 1 game, 1 screenshot that's the same as the banner, and a description that doesn't say much or what's even currently available in the game.
Please update this page with more screenshots, and what this game contains right now at this stage in development! As it is, it's very suspicious.
My bad I forgot to upload the screenshots that I had, I'll add some more when I have more content.
There we go, looks good!
Also I noticed you're using Patreon - I suggest against it. This can be considered dubious consent, and Patreon is mercilessly terminating pages with any implication of such content. Have you thought about SubscribeStar as a backup?
Just trying to prevent a tragedy before it strikes in the event this takes off!
As far as I know it should be alright, since there are some other projects like this out there and there is no problem with them. Still, creating a SubscribeStar is a good idea! But I'm already struggling with posting the game in other pages as well and managing the current ones (notice that I forgot to put the link to Patreon here until a few hours ago ;-;).
For now I'll just keep working on the next update while fixing some stuff from this one. Anyways, thanks for the concern, I'll keep it on mind.
That may be true, but usually they last a bit before being taken down. It's not always immediate and it can garner a huge following before that even happens. A good example is Two Horns. It was up for around a year and the poor creator amassed a large following only for it to be shut down out of nowhere. Just a word of caution, simply because all it takes is one report or employee to look at it and everything you've worked for is gone, especially with content that contains dubious consent.
Good luck with the game! Just keep the warnings in mind, and maybe do some research on the topic. I could very well be wrong, but Patreon's ToS doesn't define a lot of things, it uses broad terms.
I can confirm this. Not a developer myself but this is a "kink" I have and ya pretty much any and every hynosis related game whether it is lewd or not gets removed. There were a ton of articles about it a few years ago. A law for animation changed and any user created content got destroyed. Patreon and many many many other sites started removing anything that might imply nonconsensual. We aren't just talking about rape here I mean anything that "suggests it. A good example is hypnosis clicker. it is a comedy and the hypnosis often blows up in your own face. There is nudity yes but you have to really really really work for it. Subscribe Star which admittedly has very hit or miss success rates for financing and worse often runs slow and or has downtime seems to be the "mecca" of any a crowdfunding platform doesn't support something or removes it we will.
I understand SOME of the games they remove but ya I have yet to see anyone whose game got removed from patreon get it back. Hypnosis in particular for whatever reason is a serious target of theirs.
But the weird thing is there are a ton of very graphic leaving nothing to the imagination straight up rape simulators that don't get removed. Anything with hypnosis gets removed. Sometimes its a day later sometimes its 3 hours later or a year later but if you search "my game was removed from patreon for hy" you don't even have to type hypnosis out fully you will find a good hundred posts of people saying their content game/artwork/story/song was removed for hypnosis.
It is at the point where it makes me think the founder of Patreon's father or mother left them as a child because someone hypnotized them into doing so.
Yikes... Awful dark at the end there...
Unfortunate the kink is particularly bad for being removed.
I really hope this game becomes a bit like nano-control (the whole reason I now browse itch for games like this.) since that game really set the baseline for me for stuff like this.